[coreboot] M.Sc. thesis on x86 firmware alternatives

[Russell Whitaker]

On Wed, 11 Jan 2012, Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli wrote:

>> Denis could
>> then already correct some errors, if he finds them.
> I've found an error:
> Page 4 there is:
> The standard [insert 'which' here] does not just cover a communications
> protocol, is a widely used untire I/O signaling bus and describes the various
> physical and electrical characteristics of the PCI hardware.
>

Sounds awkward. try:

The standard does not just cover a communications protocol, it is a widely
used entire ...
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   Russ

> Denis.
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